Sleepy days and sleepless nights,
A daze of days and daisy fields
that are dotted, spotted left and right,
sunny gold on cotton white
like a freshly laundered summer dress.

Based on Margo Roby’s Tuesday Tryout, Summer Style Prompt
(c) Misky 20 June 2012

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  1. How lovely and summery. The whole poem feels light, doesn’t it? I particularly enjoy the internal rhymes that give the poem a playfulness.

  2. This is gorgeous, lovely, dreamy. I miss those summers. (Summer in Arizona is like living in the furnace…)

  3. I love the line “sunny gold on cotton white” — that is summer in a nutshell. You met the challenge of matching the tone/feel to the subject matter very well.

  4. I love that first line – and the daisies – so summery.


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